Development of my Contents Page

At the top is my original attempt at my contents page, below it is my final contents page. I have revised my first attempt at my contents page and continued to make changes to it. For example, in my first attempt i have at the top of the page 'contents' as a title. I decided that this was too big, i then decided to bring the magazine name from the front cover onto my contents page, in the same position on the page. This allowed me to move the title 'contents' to the left of this and make it smaller.

Then i looked at the rest of my page and realised that at the bottom of the page there was a big space with nothing in it. This made the contents page look very top heavy and very unbalanced. So then i made each of my pictures bigger and shifted them to the right hand side of the page, this made the right hand side of them page filled.

The text then had to move, so i moved the text to the left hand side of the page and I made sure that the text took up most of the left hand side of the page so there was no big spaces. The subtitle 'features' didn't stand out much so to incorporate the colour scheme more i decided to change the font colour to yellow and put a red strip behind it which linked with the red border of the main picture.

Also i felt it was hard to determine which story went with which page on my features list, so I made two changes. One was to put the page number on the picture aswell, and the second thing i did was to move the text about the pictures as close to them as possible, coupled with this was the fact that the text about the pictures is bigger than the other text in 'features'.